poemranker ::Island Vacation by LuckyJoe

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Island Vacation

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Sep 2003 · 0 comments

Death crept from a near lifeless body, Upon tidewater slowly washing away, Propelling life back to the vessel, Awake replenished to fight another day, Cares drift upon surface bobbing along, Euphoria, the touch of nature, Civilization no chance to encounter, Music the harmony of wilderness, An island a peaceful utopia, Untouched by construction, Mother Nature runs free.

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