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NonVerbal (Free verse) by Gaultier I've seen
that
"look"
before.
The one
that says
"you've seen this look before".
S ILL Y
of you
to think
a scrunched-up or
d
o
w
n
frown of
brows
could
conceal
the
direction of
E
M
O
T
I
O
N.
F UNN Y
how
I
see
when
you
look.
Up the ladder:
Life
Down the ladder:
As single as I wanna be
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Posted: July 28, 2002 12:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 12:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6900725 Overall Rank: 12052 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.96
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15-Aug-02/8:49 AM
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I like the first line, but after that, it literally falls off the page.
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