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shadows (Free verse) by crwncka1
with the noontime sun,
high in the sky,
the wind now calming,
across the way comes,
a most beautiful picture,
of what life is like,
when your eyes focus,
on what is true,
leaving all the rest,
to all the people,
who think they know,
the lives they live,
but never become aware,
of their world around,
as their all stuck,
in the night shadows
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12310
Posted: August 28, 2003 10:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 10:39 AM PDT
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"life passes most people by"
pfft. 0