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shadows (Free verse) by crwncka1
with the noontime sun, high in the sky, the wind now calming, across the way comes, a most beautiful picture, of what life is like, when your eyes focus, on what is true, leaving all the rest, to all the people, who think they know, the lives they live, but never become aware, of their world around, as their all stuck, in the night shadows

Down the ladder: Fragile

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12310
Posted: August 28, 2003 10:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 10:39 AM PDT
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[0] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.182.127 | 28-Aug-03/10:47 AM | Reply
here, lets sum this up with an overused quote:

"life passes most people by"

pfft. 0
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