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To be discontinued (Free verse) by impert&ent I am peeved
With the way words eat my mind
And spit me out
Unfinished
Up the ladder:
fragile
Down the ladder:
lost behind these lines
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Posted: August 25, 2003 4:56 PM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2003 4:56 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7042 Comments:
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25-Aug-03/7:09 PM
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no. i don't buy it.
cute, though I think "dis" in the title is overkill. And peeved seems a rather... weak feeling, considering.
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