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To be discontinued (Free verse) by impert&ent
I am peeved With the way words eat my mind And spit me out Unfinished

Up the ladder: fragile
Down the ladder: lost behind these lines

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 6985
Posted: August 25, 2003 4:56 PM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2003 4:56 PM PDT
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[n/a] <~> @ 64.252.17.3 | 25-Aug-03/7:09 PM | Reply
no. i don't buy it.
[6] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 | 5-Sep-03/9:04 AM | Reply
cute, though I think "dis" in the title is overkill. And peeved seems a rather... weak feeling, considering.
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