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Doorbells (Free verse) by Birdpia
As the dawn going, the Sun was reaching the sky I was alone in the lonely street, thinking of your smile Doubt inside myself made me awake all the time I didn't know what to do, I was dreaming on my bike As morning came, I wonder Whether the you I longed was feeling better Whether the you leaving me, was going farther I was like a child losing my tendency, Lost in the familiar city Just like the doubt you heard the doorbells ring, Wondering who was before your entrance Could it be someone you longed the most, Could it be the surprise you never knew? Just like playing with the doorbells, Wondering if there was someone in the house Doubt inside myself is increasing as, I also wondered if I could be caught When I was before your entrance, Door was opened before I could play doubt with your doorbells Letter was left on the table, And drops of tears wet your writting..

Up the ladder: A Best Friend Lost
Down the ladder: Nothing

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11091
Posted: August 24, 2003 3:53 AM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2003 8:25 AM PDT
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