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Misery (Free verse) by justjay Desperation-
Loathing-
Pain-
Heartache.
I can't hold on-
it's all familiar-
seeking out what i can't find.
Mind boggling dizziness-
engulfed by fear unknown.
A phobia to the heart-
which is soon to explode.
Loss of breath-
which i seem to never control.
The pain of it all-
must be circummed too . . .
Up the ladder:
Art of Suffering
Down the ladder:
the blessed
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Posted: August 17, 2003 7:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2003 7:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10222 Comments:
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Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13
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17-Aug-03/7:59 PM
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more descriptions... try to make it flow...5
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