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what is meant to be after me? (Ode) by Prince of Void
"the very light" truns in your eyes "the very fire" siezes all the breeze of seas that's you shape it as the heart of skies it gleams where the very picture fall down on the ocean of you and me is it meant to be that's not fancy dream it's a lie lies on" the grey moon" the moon's wrapted in the kingdom of the sarrow grows to blind "the sun" block the feeling in fragile tears they break on broken hopes-land they stream to ink of meanings meaning of being fair to where life is meant to be to where u are meant to be a man just a man who lost himself from the past what is meant to be after me ? tell me the last words will come up with me ------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------

Down the ladder: Addiction leaving by death

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7279
Posted: August 14, 2003 1:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2003 1:39 AM PDT
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.82.224.11 | 14-Aug-03/1:45 AM | Reply
that is concern with man's innersied
that is realate to the nothingness
that is when beauty fall down
and death comes
it is where i become ready to different man in different life for thousand times
and it is a pace to the path of life where man still has conflict with himself
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