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The Shadow's Dead (Free verse) by loneshadow29
Stupid bitch, like what you see?
Those terrible demons inside
Their bonds quickly breaking free
And from them I cannot hide
Youâve unlocked the pain
Iâve held inside for so long
Within, so much distain
You know what is wrong
You let out my hatred
The poison in my soul
All the feelings I wanted dead
And that I could never control
My eyes almost burning
You know that it is too late
Your life in ruin I am yearning
Prepare to meet your fate
Ripping down the joy inside
Setting fire to your dreams
Only in death can you confide
Watch them fall apart at the seams
I laugh with such furious rage
A venomous smile on my face
Darkness broke free from its cage
And forever have I embraced
So lie in ruin you stupid bitch
And say hello to the dread
For in evil I have become rich
And the man you once knew is dead
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9442
Posted: August 12, 2003 9:39 PM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2003 9:39 PM PDT
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