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Twilit Beach (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
Sand dune hillocks lift
and flex;
a supine nude
peach
in dusk.
The sea, timid.
Snow capped mountains
glimmer,
continental drift, accelerated:
a million tiny pinprick stars.
Magenta sky,
clouds
on fire
raging cirrus fairy floss;
a strung-out wispy web.
Lay back,
inhale the salted
atmosphere, and
let the overheard wash of the swell
rock you to sleep.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4652
Posted: July 25, 2002 1:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 1:10 AM PDT
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