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Summer Vacation (Other) by weeb I asked her where she wanted to go this year.
She said,
"I just don't want to see another phallic monument dedicated to the
industry of man."
So we went to the Grand Canyon.
Up the ladder:
Hard Month
Down the ladder:
Twilit Beach
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Posted: May 10, 2002 5:25 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 5:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1910205 Overall Rank: 4651 Comments:
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10-May-02/5:37 PM
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Woo!
this is hilarious. :)
Lovely,
makes me laugh. the art of just how much to say and how to put it together; you stay on the tightrope and the result is a smile that goes on...
LOVED this! Elegant, wry humor, complicated, resonant
A very modern epigram,
But moreso joke than poem; A guy who couldn't give a *care* Will find himself at home.
Why is this a poem? Its a stand-up punch line.
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