poemranker ::black by sk8rs_rule_all

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Free verse № 58577

black

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

To each his own some like to say. What do i have? nothing. Third time is the charm people like to chant. Whats my charm? None. Move on, its not healthy to sulk. What is healthy? no answer Are you healthy? No Do You have answers to my questions you fool? No...Who is the fool here? Me Am i the fool? No What is black? umm a color? WRONG AGAIN my boy...Black is a shade, a very fine shade. And one final thing i might add to this. Whats that? Clean your room dinner is almost ready *this was a conforsation between both father and son. The father is the one asking the questions and as you can tell the son is the one answering the questions with great puzzlement.*

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4 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 31-Jul-03/4:49 PM Reply
what a bum crushingly pointless block of text
[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 31-Jul-03/7:07 PM Reply
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! wow, that was stupifying, totally.
[6] http://mulberryfairy 31-Jul-03/7:19 PM Reply
a con-fornication (or a conformation) between father and son?
[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all › http://mulberryfairy 29-Dec-03/12:07 PM Reply
damn damn damn i mispelled conversation.