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Topic of Death II

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · Edited 17 Jul 2015 · 1 comment

Oh straightened back, So tense, no slack, on slab of stone, all alone! The look in your eyes, Deep inside, All vision gone, Now so obscure, all a-blur. Yellow tag strung on toe, No price, no sale, No name I know, could be Doe. No tears, No fears, Only frigid nights, Outstretched arms, O'er thee, Your sleeve. "T.O.D" I see.

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[10] deleted user 19-Feb-05/11:40 AM Reply
Fuckin love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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