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Topic of Death II (Free verse) by ARTIE
Oh straightened back, So tense, no slack, on slab of stone, all alone! The look in your eyes, Deep inside, All vision gone, Now so obscure, all a-blur. Yellow tag strung on toe, No price, no sale, No name I know, could be Doe. No tears, No fears, Only frigid nights, Outstretched arms, O'er thee, Your sleeve. "T.O.D" I see.

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Posted: July 22, 2002 10:08 PM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2015 1:53 PM PDT
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[10] deleted user @ 216.135.39.196 | 19-Feb-05/11:40 AM | Reply
Fuckin love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Peekster
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