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New Forms (Free verse) by Rodavlas
New age, new light new friends, new fights. New forms of pasture and scenic veiws of cynical bastards. Foaming at the tips of the sands a storm is glowing. New forms of Love, new forms of Hate, Impudic dreams of quarrels and heat. New forms of illusory fields, sliding my fingers through the air with finnesse. The clouds are cumulous today, the skies are boundful in play. New forms, new sounds, new age, no frowns.

Up the ladder: I shot speed
Down the ladder: War Grave

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 6.566554
Overall Rank: 630
Posted: July 13, 2003 6:01 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2003 6:01 PM PDT
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[5] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.46 | 13-Jul-03/10:07 PM | Reply
Spelling = views, question boundful, do you mean bountiful

A little repetitive on the New Forms bit.
[9] Tahlia @ 144.137.78.149 | 13-Jul-03/10:20 PM | Reply
I really liked this, wonderfully descriptive!
[n/a] Rodavlas @ 198.138.190.203 > Tahlia | 14-Jul-03/9:55 AM | Reply
thanks
[7] richa @ 81.86.230.218 | 14-Jul-03/8:58 AM | Reply
yes nice little rhythm running through this

I'd get rid of hate....heat it seems to clah
[n/a] Rodavlas @ 198.138.190.203 > richa | 14-Jul-03/9:57 AM | Reply
i thought about that when i was typing it out again... maybe i'll actually change it.

sorry about my spelling errors..
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