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Gems of love, stones of war (Villanelle) by Shardik
An emerald green to crimson swing
The quiet ones can't be trusted
Their love is designed for pressing
Under the moon waning pale you bring
Your heart completely busted
An emerald green to crimson swing
Are you awake, can you hold the bearing
For all that you have lusted
Their love is designed for pressing
An oath of trust, a faith worth swearing
For battle your gear's adjusted
An emerald green to crimson swing
Some times, in my dreams you sing,
As I am dying on a grey field rusted
Their love is designed for pressing
I fought as I loved, an umeasurable thing
The finger prints can't be dusted
An emerald green to crimson swing
Their love is designed for pressing.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.375
Weighted score: 5.3697944
Overall Rank: 3258
Posted: July 6, 2003 11:48 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 11:48 AM PDT
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