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Gems of love, stones of war (Villanelle) by Shardik
An emerald green to crimson swing The quiet ones can't be trusted Their love is designed for pressing Under the moon waning pale you bring Your heart completely busted An emerald green to crimson swing Are you awake, can you hold the bearing For all that you have lusted Their love is designed for pressing An oath of trust, a faith worth swearing For battle your gear's adjusted An emerald green to crimson swing Some times, in my dreams you sing, As I am dying on a grey field rusted Their love is designed for pressing I fought as I loved, an umeasurable thing The finger prints can't be dusted An emerald green to crimson swing Their love is designed for pressing.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.375
Weighted score: 5.3697944
Overall Rank: 3258
Posted: July 6, 2003 11:48 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 11:48 AM PDT
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[9] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.182.8 | 6-Jul-03/12:06 PM | Reply
Now this love poem is... refreshing.. love poems needed a spice, a tune up... damned good mechanic you are. 9.
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