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Untitled Apology (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer
I let my spirit leave for the west
I lay my body down for some rest
But as I see cloud nine in the sky
Beauty and hope take over my eye
It fills me with once lost hope
I feel more slack in my rope
And I look around just to see
All the calm and peace around me
Tears start to leave a wake
And I feel my body shake
And for once I feel like I know
Which way I`m supposed to go
I know if I get lost on my way
Or if I can`t make the pay
I can turn to have you there
And I know that you`ll still care
I once tried to push you back
Fearing your helping hands like an attack
Now if you`re willing to forgive
I`ll take anything you have to give
And I can help you if you need
I`m trying to give up my ways of greed
Just turn to me one day or night
If you need help in the battles you fight
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Weighted score: 4.577378
Overall Rank: 12585
Posted: July 21, 2002 3:56 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 3:56 AM PDT
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