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Dying in the Moonlight (Free verse) by leviathan
So long as I fail to leave a shadow beneath the nighttime moon
I will run forever
As long as the calls I send out disappear into the night
I will be alone forever
Bloody rain
angry air
screaming forth from a moonlit sky
Frozen tears
chilling air
screaming for light within which to die
Death by indulgence
the final fate stored between a moon and the stars
a thorn endured to experience how beautiful you are
Insanity from alleigence
the residue of loving something outside of me
a fate incurred for being nothing more than me
The sun dies forever finding nothing left to see.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7034
Posted: June 15, 2003 5:02 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 5:02 PM PDT
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some people don't like arbitrary indents and carriage returns but I think it keeps you on your toes.