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Dying in the Moonlight (Free verse) by leviathan
So long as I fail to leave a shadow beneath the nighttime moon I will run forever As long as the calls I send out disappear into the night I will be alone forever Bloody rain angry air screaming forth from a moonlit sky Frozen tears chilling air screaming for light within which to die Death by indulgence the final fate stored between a moon and the stars a thorn endured to experience how beautiful you are Insanity from alleigence the residue of loving something outside of me a fate incurred for being nothing more than me The sun dies forever finding nothing left to see.


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7031
Posted: June 15, 2003 5:02 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 5:02 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 64.63.204.8 | 19-Sep-03/2:37 PM | Reply
good poem.

some people don't like arbitrary indents and carriage returns but I think it keeps you on your toes.
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