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Free verse № 52512

In Your Confusion

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

Ice, without water Frightened, without fear Laugh, without happiness Cry, without tears Sleep, without dreams Scream, without emotion I’m sorry you came Hear, don’t listen Sparkle, don’t glisten My voice is now gone Melodies still singing My songs last long Honest liar Authentic poser Colorfully plain Innocently evil Freeze while melting Wash with dirt Kindly be mean Unwillingly flirt Unconsciously thinking Luck, unmistaken Stand in clouds Swim in sand Run in water Fall in land Now that you’re gone All you hold is deceit I miss you I’m glad that you’re gone I’m Mad that you left My heart you took with you Kept it, theft I wish you where here I don’t know why When we were together All you did was make me cry You killed me but I’m still alive I hate you I loathe you I miss you I want you I love you

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[2] god'swife 11-Jun-03/10:09 PM Reply
Aaaaaaaargh....
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 11-Jun-03/10:15 PM Reply
Parfait? Anyone? Going once, GOING TWICE All right, looks like it's all mine, SOLD! to the man from Manchuria.