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I'm Standing On The Edge (Lyric) by Deborah Carter
mental misery- heart full of pain unholy ghost comes to visit again comes to seek- what it can devour in this place where - the darkness- has power (chorus) I'm standing on the edge -can anybody see me I need a little help can't -somebody reach me take me by the hand...can you hear me call is there an angel in this darkness- who'll catch me when I fall ( breakaway) I'm falling...oh I'm falling.... yes I'm falling ...catch me -catch me (fade out) the darkness calls me razored scars-deep cut wounds in my temple-of many rooms slashed to the bone- my sores won't heal this darkness is blinding.....this darkeness..is real (chorus) I'm standing on the edge -can anybody see me I need a little light can't -somebody reach me take me by the hand...if you hear me call be my saving grace -from this darkness -when I fall ( breakaway) I'm falling...oh I'm falling.... yes I'm falling ...catch me -catch me (fade out) the darkness calls me (tag) I'm hanging by a thread...darkness if my fear....is anybody out there does somebody hear me..... falling Deborah Carter copyright:2003

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12139
Posted: June 1, 2003 8:27 AM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2003 8:27 AM PDT
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