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Free verse № 50264

Drowning

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 May 2003 · 1 comment

Drowning Drowning in a sea of despair Alive or Dead, I no longer care All I remember is the smell of her hair All I remember is that she is not there What I have is all I can give I’m drowning still in the life I live I need to be given an alternative Cause this lack of breathing has become excessive The light at the end is not in sight The supply of air has run tight I’m drowning with the water’s might If there is life, it is so slight Come now has the final reckoning I can’t stop the voices from beckoning This life has become so suffocating I’m Drowning

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[5] horus8 26-May-03/1:16 PM Reply
Then do.