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Drowning (Free verse) by Felzpoet
Drowning
Drowning in a sea of despair
Alive or Dead, I no longer care
All I remember is the smell of her hair
All I remember is that she is not there
What I have is all I can give
Iâm drowning still in the life I live
I need to be given an alternative
Cause this lack of breathing has become excessive
The light at the end is not in sight
The supply of air has run tight
Iâm drowning with the waterâs might
If there is life, it is so slight
Come now has the final reckoning
I canât stop the voices from beckoning
This life has become so suffocating
Iâm Drowning
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12062
Posted: May 25, 2003 5:46 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2003 5:46 PM PDT
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