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Drowning (Free verse) by Felzpoet
Drowning Drowning in a sea of despair Alive or Dead, I no longer care All I remember is the smell of her hair All I remember is that she is not there What I have is all I can give I’m drowning still in the life I live I need to be given an alternative Cause this lack of breathing has become excessive The light at the end is not in sight The supply of air has run tight I’m drowning with the water’s might If there is life, it is so slight Come now has the final reckoning I can’t stop the voices from beckoning This life has become so suffocating I’m Drowning

Up the ladder: Pipedream
Down the ladder: Eric D. Brock

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12057
Posted: May 25, 2003 5:46 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2003 5:46 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-May-03/1:16 PM | Reply
Then do.
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