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“If It Don’t Feel Right” (Free verse) by kalikopeli
We’ve been together, for not so long. Yet I feel our love is so strong You’ve said some things that were so true When it comes to love it’s all about you You seem to think that my love comes and goes Love is not a switch and so it flows When it comes to you I wear my heart on my sleeve, But it’s in my love you must believe If it don’t feel right, let me know, ‘Cause only time will help us grow If it don’t feel right, let me know, “Cause I gotta love here to show If it don’t feel right let me know, ‘Cause I gotta heart that glistens gold. And if you ever feel My,love for you is not real Just look to your heart and you’ll know the deal It’s through my body you send these chills And sometimes you feel alone It’s not my doing, loneliness I don’t condone You gotta way of letting me know, My heart is yours and you’re never letting go If it don’t feel right, let me know, ‘Cause only time will help us grow If it don’t feel right, let me know, “Cause I gotta love here to show If it don’t feel right let me know, ‘Cause I gotta heart that glistens gold. And if I go out with my friends, Trust in me baby our love will not come to an end I know you were scorned with the last Trust in me, my love will soon make it past Trust in me baby we’ll make it right, Even if I stay out late tonight Love me baby lets avoid the fights Dr/0503

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12353
Posted: May 23, 2003 9:21 AM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2003 9:21 AM PDT
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[n/a] dougsoderstrom @ 207.80.112.1 | 23-May-03/1:11 PM | Reply
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
[n/a] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 > dougsoderstrom | 24-May-03/8:10 AM | Reply
Read my new poem ("Doug Soderstrom")----it's a WINNER!
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