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Alone (Free verse) by aurora
When you feel so alone
And nobody cares
When you feel like a big useless drone
And your heart starts to tear
When you donât remember
And your mind gets hazy
You start to feel so crazy
And when the life youâve lost
Feels like it has been tossed
When itâs forgotten
And your mind has turned rotten
When youâre lying distant
On that cold stone floor
You may seem resistant
To realize that you need more
To keep you here
Because you needed so much more
Than that small voice
And that one last tear
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11729
Posted: May 21, 2003 5:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 5:57 PM PDT
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