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Alone (Free verse) by aurora
When you feel so alone And nobody cares When you feel like a big useless drone And your heart starts to tear When you don’t remember And your mind gets hazy You start to feel so crazy And when the life you’ve lost Feels like it has been tossed When it’s forgotten And your mind has turned rotten When you’re lying distant On that cold stone floor You may seem resistant To realize that you need more To keep you here Because you needed so much more Than that small voice And that one last tear

Up the ladder: Im innocent
Down the ladder: He says

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11724
Posted: May 21, 2003 5:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 5:57 PM PDT
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[8] Roisin @ 149.170.39.36 | 22-May-03/11:04 AM | Reply
Really insightful. I too have felt like that and it ani't pretty!
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