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Untitled (Free verse) by lil cindy lu who
He yelled about the Devil and preached damnation in my southern childhood town. Brown canvas tented off the Dipper while swooning souls bought salvation, bartered with silvered coin. We crawled through unblessed sand to pile limp hay and heathen weeds into his darkened four door sedan, all to hear him scream 'God damn' one last time after the revival ended and the tent poles came down.

Up the ladder: suck fucker punch
Down the ladder: Twenty Cigarette Burns Ago

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2184
Posted: May 21, 2003 5:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 5:48 PM PDT
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[9] kassanna @ 205.188.208.102 | 21-May-03/5:57 PM | Reply
HaHaHa you must have grown up in my home town...clever poem if I may say so
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