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juice before coffee (Free verse) by nolan
the passion fruitness
pineapple
orange
trickles of moisture drip down
as the straw stands tall
in a represention of piza
relaxing my white throat
covered in night resude
healing my sadness
water is now moisture
must put out the fire
watching out for the splash
turning the liquid black
not white (not a rapist - vegan)
too hot to touch
too hot to taste
stirring its inside out
grasping the handle gently
taking in the wonderful smell
whisperingly i blow
reaching in for a first taste
rejected with a firing fury
hurting so bad to taste the pain
going to take some time
before trying another attempt
affraid of the pain that faces
smoking in swirls of motion
heart is ever so pounding
needing it, can't wait
ahhhhhh..... what a sensation
sweet like candy
feeling so good
having you in my hand
for a wonderful taste when choosing
needing you to fullfil my day
without you weakness trembles
holding me up as my crutch
listeing to my every word
giving me all you have
loving me as i am loving you
sadness comes
when you go
drinking every last bit
needing more coffee
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7875
Posted: May 13, 2003 1:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2003 1:29 PM PDT
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