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Mother (Free verse) by sk8rs_rule_all
Mothers are strong and bold rarely ever mean and cold. You were one of the few who bought me everything new. to be a mother is like no other. you chose to be one even if it wasent fun. Teaching me to walk teaching em to talk, was something very hard even if you didn't get a card. You did it because you loved me and you'll have to set me free. Sooner than you think I'll be grown up in a blink, maybe even a wink. I love you so much because you are my crutch. whenever i wanted to talk you were there. whenever i wanted to argue you were there. whenever i wanted to say i love you you were there. Happy mother's day It's your day in may To celebrate your job and dont forget about mob

Up the ladder: Eternal Waiting
Down the ladder: Wit and Eloquence

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11813
Posted: May 9, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: May 9, 2003 1:00 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.102 | 9-May-03/2:58 PM | Reply
I would say "great use of 'talk' to rhyme with 'walk'" but honestly! This HAS to be a joke. Good 1! "and don't forget about mob" -- genius.
[n/a] deleted user @ 205.188.209.7 | 9-May-03/6:42 PM | Reply
cuz u could do better
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