Fire roses

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 May 2003 · 1 comment

I feel the shape of your back the curve of your neck I know the touch of your hair on my skin I hold you close and breathe you in with kisses held back on my lips blooming like fire roses.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-03/1:37 AM Reply

You should rewrite this in the shape of a heart, or perhaps a bumblebee.