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Fire roses (Free verse) by Indigo I feel
the shape of your back
the curve of your neck
I know
the touch of your hair
on my skin
I hold you close
and breathe you in
with kisses
held back on my lips
blooming
like fire roses.
Up the ladder:
my so called life
Down the ladder:
Never Better
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Posted: May 7, 2003 8:12 AM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2003 8:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10647 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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8-May-03/1:37 AM
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You should rewrite this in the shape of a heart, or perhaps a bumblebee.
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