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Perfect Love (Lyric) by snowing
I'll walk past you, You'll walk by too. Then all of a sudden We'll turn around... I'll look into your deep eyes And my heart will melt, You'll have a funny feeling -- Love is what you felt. It'll feel so natural, so right. It'll be love at first sight. You'll make me laugh When I'll feel bad. I'll make you happy When you'll feel sad. You'll understand me When no one will understand the fuss. I'll listen to you When no one else does. We'll dance into a world of our own, Like a flower our love would have grown. We'll fly there on the wings of love, Like peace carried by a white dove. You'll hold me tight, I'll never leave you, ever, I won't let go, You'll be with me forever. We'll be together till the end Because there'll never be a problem We won't be able to mend. You'll be my perfect and special guy, You'll always be so true. You'll love me forever And I will always love you. I'll look at the stars, I'll gaze at the moon And wish that I'll find you very soon

Up the ladder: kauri
Down the ladder: PURPLE COWS

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2222223
Weighted score: 4.611111
Overall Rank: 12476
Posted: July 15, 2002 9:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 9:21 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] god'swife @ 209.178.176.95 | 6-Sep-02/10:10 PM | Reply
What makes this a poem? Please explain.
[4] vulcan @ 80.242.3.132 | 7-Sep-02/12:18 AM | Reply
OK!
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