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I am your pea (Free verse) by Figure 8
When you roll me like a little pea I am yours.
I am your little fresh exciting pea.
Caught on your fork in pain and fear of your hungry mouth, my mind
thrashes for the freedom my body has no limbs to express.
At good teatimes we play, I, rolled around your plate. You and your
smile and your teasing fork. You save me till last.
I am your little pea, my sweet fresh perfect round body glinting on your
white plate in the sun.
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Posted: April 27, 2003 1:30 PM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2003 1:30 PM PDT
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