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Sarah (Free verse) by talking_goldfish Incomprehensible.
Eyes as blue as the sky on a beautiful summerâs day,
To lose myself within, a dream beyond compare.
Lost among the golden sands
Of a place so far away,
Lost beneath a sea so blue
That even mermaids play.
Undeniable.
When the day turns into night and the light begins to fade,
The stars shine out for love, they shine for you and I.
When the birds sing out each morn
They sing your name so sweet,
And that theyâll sing for all of time
For you make me complete.
Sarah. Sarah.
I love you.
Up the ladder:
Procession
Down the ladder:
Pity me.
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Posted: April 19, 2003 4:25 PM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2003 4:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4341 Comments:
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Ranger @ 213.1.45.14
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20-Apr-03/1:22 AM
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Very nice!
Sarah? That's a jewish name. More Jewish idolatry gone amuck.
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