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a playful rain (Free verse) by moonhound22
a playful rain, dancing atop the earth's green carpet, sings a melody of a freedom once known, once prized, by a child's eyes; of a radiance since faded to the weight of another sleepless dawn, the colors bleeding, until a murky gray smothers the view. a playful rain skips along, through a void now filled by obligations, worries, and fear. a playful rain makes me shiver with contempt.

Up the ladder: Assassin Nation
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6962
Posted: July 15, 2002 11:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 11:55 AM PDT
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