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Free verse № 4684

a playful rain

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

a playful rain, dancing atop the earth's green carpet, sings a melody of a freedom once known, once prized, by a child's eyes; of a radiance since faded to the weight of another sleepless dawn, the colors bleeding, until a murky gray smothers the view. a playful rain skips along, through a void now filled by obligations, worries, and fear. a playful rain makes me shiver with contempt.

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