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a playful rain (Free verse) by moonhound22
a playful rain,
dancing
atop the earth's green carpet, sings
a melody of a freedom
once known, once prized,
by a child's eyes; of
a radiance since faded to the weight
of another sleepless dawn,
the colors bleeding,
until a murky gray smothers
the view.
a playful rain
skips along, through a void
now filled by obligations,
worries, and fear.
a playful rain
makes me shiver with
contempt.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6965
Posted: July 15, 2002 11:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 11:55 AM PDT
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