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Contemplation Of The Heart (Free verse) by kalikopeli
I sat and thought of what words I wanted to say, one look at you, and the words I had somehow just slipped away. So instead, I sat and took the pen to the pad, I started remembering the wonderful times we've had. Looking forward, thinking about our future, you and I inspite of our culture. Together you and I can move mountains, Convert oceans into water fountains. We have that power you and I. You're my lucky star I see brightly burning in the sky. And when all hope is lost, it's you I turn to, that's why there's nothing in this world I would'nt do for you. Love to me is represented by you, and like you, there can be no other. I need your love, like an infant needs its mother. My love you truely are my destiny. I love you forever and until eternity.

Up the ladder: THE INTERNET
Down the ladder: Man In A Street

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 11988
Posted: April 10, 2003 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2003 12:52 PM PDT
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[n/a] kalikopeli @ 63.241.65.90 | 15-Aug-04/8:55 PM | Reply
I still think it's one of my bests.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 | 15-Aug-04/10:00 PM | Reply
Unbelievably appalling. I shan't comment further on the poetry, but will give you the following important Life Tip: an apostrophe usually indicates a missing letter(or letters). In the case of "wouldn't", the missing letter is the "o" of "not". That's how you know the apostrophe must be between the "n" and the "t". Not between the "d" and the "n". Demonstrate your understanding by correctly placing the apostrophe in the following words: wouldnt, couldnt, thats, theyre (4 marks)
[1] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 15-Aug-04/10:55 PM | Reply
"I still think it's one of my bests."

There you go thinking again.
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