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Why? Pt 1 (Free verse) by hdw
Why? Why the hell? Why the hell do I? Why the hell do I still? Why the hell do I still care? Why the hell do I still care about? Why the hell do I still care about you? Why the hell do I still care about you and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him and what you do? Why the fuck should I give a shit about what you are doing right at this very moment? Why the hell am I writing this?
Up the ladder: ship
Down the ladder: Carved Out In Stone
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Overall Rank: 12832
Posted: March 30, 2003 10:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2003 10:21 PM PST
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[n/a] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 30-Mar-03/10:49 PM | Reply
Can't wait for pt.2!! Hope you don't pull a history of the world on our asses!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
[2] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 31-Mar-03/12:53 AM | Reply
I like the last line. It really connects with the reader.
[n/a] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.113.100 | 31-Mar-03/7:17 AM | Reply
why indeed. whine for a few more hours, maybe it will help.
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