poemranker ::Why? Pt 1 by hdw

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Why? Pt 1

by hdw

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

Why? Why the hell? Why the hell do I? Why the hell do I still? Why the hell do I still care? Why the hell do I still care about? Why the hell do I still care about you? Why the hell do I still care about you and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him and what you do? Why the fuck should I give a shit about what you are doing right at this very moment? Why the hell am I writing this?

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3 comments

[n/a] TanHand 30-Mar-03/10:49 PM Reply
Can't wait for pt.2!! Hope you don't pull a history of the world on our asses!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
[2] OneFingerAnswer 31-Mar-03/12:53 AM Reply
I like the last line. It really connects with the reader.
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 31-Mar-03/7:17 AM Reply
why indeed. whine for a few more hours, maybe it will help.