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Why? Pt 1 (Free verse) by hdw

Why? Why the hell? Why the hell do I? Why the hell do I still? Why the hell do I still care? Why the hell do I still care about? Why the hell do I still care about you? Why the hell do I still care about you and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him? Why the hell do I still care about you and him and him and what you do? Why the fuck should I give a shit about what you are doing right at this very moment? Why the hell am I writing this?

OneFingerAnswer 31-Mar-03/12:53 AM
I like the last line. It really connects with the reader.




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