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what i do? (Free verse) by trina_marie_73 The days were short
And nights were cold
I thought you were mine
To at least have and hold
But you played me
And like a fool I played too
I thought I could change a player
I thought I could change you
But pain was all I got
And a lifetime of heartache
I trusted and cared for you
But worse I loved you too
Only question I have to ask is â¦
What did I ever do to you?
Up the ladder:
You are not alone
Down the ladder:
ragdango
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Posted: March 30, 2003 4:40 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2003 4:40 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.72186 Overall Rank: 11881 Comments:
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22-Jun-04/5:27 AM
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great poem, go check out my freestyles too
Very cliche...
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