poemranker ::what i do? by trina_marie_73

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Free verse № 45661

what i do?

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

The days were short And nights were cold I thought you were mine To at least have and hold But you played me And like a fool I played too I thought I could change a player I thought I could change you But pain was all I got And a lifetime of heartache I trusted and cared for you But worse I loved you too Only question I have to ask is … What did I ever do to you?

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[n/a] deleted user 22-Jun-04/5:27 AM Reply
great poem, go check out my freestyles too
[7] boldsilence 22-Jun-04/11:22 AM Reply
Very cliche...