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what i do? (Free verse) by trina_marie_73
The days were short And nights were cold I thought you were mine To at least have and hold But you played me And like a fool I played too I thought I could change a player I thought I could change you But pain was all I got And a lifetime of heartache I trusted and cared for you But worse I loved you too Only question I have to ask is … What did I ever do to you?

Up the ladder: You are not alone
Down the ladder: ragdango

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11823
Posted: March 30, 2003 4:40 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2003 4:40 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.69.255.205 | 22-Jun-04/5:27 AM | Reply
great poem, go check out my freestyles too
[7] boldsilence @ 68.11.251.86 | 22-Jun-04/11:22 AM | Reply
Very cliche...
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