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what i do? (Free verse) by trina_marie_73

The days were short And nights were cold I thought you were mine To at least have and hold But you played me And like a fool I played too I thought I could change a player I thought I could change you But pain was all I got And a lifetime of heartache I trusted and cared for you But worse I loved you too Only question I have to ask is … What did I ever do to you?

boldsilence 22-Jun-04/11:22 AM
Very cliche...

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