poemranker ::Gone by Katie2

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Free verse № 45488

Gone

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Mar 2003 · Edited 27 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

The words that would express me, Have recently left me. I can?t tell you how I feel For no longer are the words for real. They just seem to float about, Like dust in the wind, This time I guess love just couldn?t win. Days turn into weeks, And weeks into months, How fast time flied, When your heart was mine.

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[5] Caducus 27-Mar-03/9:33 AM Reply
It just don't work as a poem, as a lyric with a chorus maybe.