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Gone (Free verse) by Katie2
The words that would express me, Have recently left me. I can?t tell you how I feel For no longer are the words for real. They just seem to float about, Like dust in the wind, This time I guess love just couldn?t win. Days turn into weeks, And weeks into months, How fast time flied, When your heart was mine.

Up the ladder: charterhouse of dante
Down the ladder: Old Musician's Recipie

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7865
Posted: March 27, 2003 5:49 AM PST; Last modified: March 27, 2003 5:50 AM PST
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[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 27-Mar-03/9:33 AM | Reply
It just don't work as a poem, as a lyric with a chorus maybe.
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