Replying to a comment on:

Gone (Free verse) by Katie2

The words that would express me, Have recently left me. I can?t tell you how I feel For no longer are the words for real. They just seem to float about, Like dust in the wind, This time I guess love just couldn?t win. Days turn into weeks, And weeks into months, How fast time flied, When your heart was mine.

Caducus 27-Mar-03/9:33 AM
It just don't work as a poem, as a lyric with a chorus maybe.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001