Lyric № 45476

saltonstall

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

sometimes i feel im drowning in your love sometimes i dont know who i am when im around you your all im thinking of when im around you ill always make a stand i miss your smile, i miss your eyes i love your accent, its no surprise youre the most precious girl on earth and ive searched all over the world feel like ive known you since birth you know this winter will be cold youre cute when your paranoid when im around you i always smile somehow within me you fill a void but have you loved me all the while?

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[3] Stephen Robins 22-Jun-04/5:48 AM Reply

This poem stinks worse than a prawne covered in brine grease and stewed in the bowels of an elderly woman only to be dislodged by a roaring trump which shredded the old ladies ringpiece!

What sir do you think of that?