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saltonstall (Lyric) by mick1776
sometimes i feel im drowning in your love sometimes i dont know who i am when im around you your all im thinking of when im around you ill always make a stand i miss your smile, i miss your eyes i love your accent, its no surprise youre the most precious girl on earth and ive searched all over the world feel like ive known you since birth you know this winter will be cold youre cute when your paranoid when im around you i always smile somehow within me you fill a void but have you loved me all the while?

Up the ladder: Toxic & Water
Down the ladder: You are not alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11874
Posted: March 26, 2003 4:28 PM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2003 4:28 PM PST
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[3] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 22-Jun-04/5:48 AM | Reply
This poem stinks worse than a prawne covered in brine grease and stewed in the bowels of an elderly woman only to be dislodged by a roaring trump which shredded the old ladies ringpiece!

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