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crush (Sonnet) by kthulah
though plain and simple's what you said you'd like
again your pimpled tongue has gone on strike
apparently the raw and open breast
beats quietly if law is your behest
"just be yourself" on penalty of chill
well there is self but now more deftly killed
but blame is game and i've no heart for play
i'm lame a shame this tart will go away
whatever insecurities you've lain
to rest in my obscurity and pain
they've cured penile irrelevance, my tears
why maybe you can bottle them like beers
and set them on a shelf as you did me
the self demanded but dishonestly
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10325
Posted: March 24, 2003 10:09 AM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2003 10:09 AM PST
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