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Free verse № 42479

Another

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

I place one foot on your thigh and test your strength as I test mine pushing against that muscled, taut skin sinuous and tempting all the same. I lay my head on your shoulder, content and relaxed, but still wondering; allowing certain thoughts emerge, overwhelm this bliss settling over us. The lights are dimmed, but the sun shines brightly through the tattered curtains; clearly stating the early hour and of the quickness in which we leave each other, this place that holds our forbidden memories and daily retreat into the only moments of time which we can find solace; an escape from the reality in which life has imprisoned us within.

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[n/a] emeraldeyes 5-Mar-03/7:02 PM Reply
the third verse is the best.