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Feminine (Ode) by temptalia
Sculpted by the finest artists, collaboration of flawlessness beyond godliness, closer to the likes of a goddess; her strength cleverly disguised underneath pale, smooth skin and fragile features; carefully molded to defy the restrictions of nature; with a wittiness that belies her intelligence; a deadly combination of beauty, brawns, and brain and a whispered mantra of indisputable intuitiveness that gives her a power which cannot be denied; she--the perpetuator of the species-- the most glorified and honored of the sexes; soft where he is hard, smooth where he is rough, she compliments and contrasts using the subtleness that is only mastered through the gentle lines of femininity.

Up the ladder: Nobody
Down the ladder: Mirror to Mirror

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6083
Posted: March 4, 2003 9:05 AM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2003 9:05 AM PST
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