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travels (Free verse) by eyzwdeshut
what did i give that i didn't want you to have? what did i say that i didn't want you to hear? i gave freel, i spoke without regret in my life, in my head, in my consciousness - you are ther. i will not ask you to leave. i open the door & invite you in. join me, know me, touch me touch my mind, my heart, my body ask for what you want take all i give you walk away if you must... i already know the answer - it's not about the destination it's always been about the journey.

Up the ladder: Winter Song
Down the ladder: Peacock Fight

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11069
Posted: March 2, 2003 8:40 PM PST; Last modified: March 2, 2003 8:40 PM PST
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[3] god'swife @ 67.73.32.155 | 18-Sep-03/10:20 AM | Reply
Errrr, tell me what you gave what you said, what you spoke, I can;t join you touch you know you or apprieciate this poem enless you give me some specifics please. Check your mis-spells.
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