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travels (Free verse) by eyzwdeshut

what did i give that i didn't want you to have? what did i say that i didn't want you to hear? i gave freel, i spoke without regret in my life, in my head, in my consciousness - you are ther. i will not ask you to leave. i open the door & invite you in. join me, know me, touch me touch my mind, my heart, my body ask for what you want take all i give you walk away if you must... i already know the answer - it's not about the destination it's always been about the journey.

god'swife 18-Sep-03/10:20 AM
Errrr, tell me what you gave what you said, what you spoke, I can;t join you touch you know you or apprieciate this poem enless you give me some specifics please. Check your mis-spells.




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