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Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Feb 2003 · Edited 24 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

This feeling inside me it makes me so sad so mad It makes cry makes me want to die It hurts but I have to get through it. So I just sit and wait. I love him so much I just cry and cry. I look into the sky and wonder why. Why must i feel this way? This feeling inside me makes me so sad so mad...

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[6] Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/2:41 PM Reply

Hope it wasn't something I said. :)
Nice use of form, a bit heavy on the assonance--beware of sounding too sing-songy. 6.

[3] Nanshe 24-Feb-03/4:50 PM Reply

so....dare I say...bad?

[7] CrAzYlAdY Surukain 24-Feb-03/7:52 PM Reply

Hmm i give.........a 7 , hey 7 aint bad ya know!?