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(untitled) (Other) by Ray

This feeling inside me it makes me so sad so mad It makes cry makes me want to die It hurts but I have to get through it. So I just sit and wait. I love him so much I just cry and cry. I look into the sky and wonder why. Why must i feel this way? This feeling inside me makes me so sad so mad...

Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/2:41 PM
Hope it wasn't something I said. :)
Nice use of form, a bit heavy on the assonance--beware of sounding too sing-songy. 6.




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