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A Lost Friend (Free verse) by Ray It wasn't her decision you drove her away.
She wanted to stay.
But you might as well have crushed her heart.
Now all you have is a lost friend.
She isn't coming back no matter what you do.
Because all you have is .. a lost friend.
You betrayed her.
Now she knows how you really feel.
She doesn't need you anymore.
She has a new life and new wonders and new dreams to live.
And all you have is..... a lost friend.
Up the ladder:
Sprinklers
Down the ladder:
F.R.O.G.
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Posted: February 24, 2003 9:37 AM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2003 9:37 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.615798 Overall Rank: 12443 Comments:
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CrAzYlAdY Surukain @ 66.218.250.64
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24-Feb-03/9:42 AM
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I luved this poem when u first showed me it.
YAWN. bo-ring. theraputing wring is a nice thing to do, but too often folks think it is good for sharing. keep these to yourself. write about something new.
I meant "theraputic writing".
Don't you mean you meant "therapeutic writing"?
Sorry I don't type so well since my accident. I'm still getting used to using one elbow and one foot on the modified keyboard. The Doctors think I am coming along nicely.
Please accept my sincerest condolences!!!!!!11
Is the awful quality of "less than a sentence 2" and "less than a sentence 3" compared to the genius "less than a sentence" due to your mishap?
as much as I'd like to blame them on brain injury, they were more of an attempt to repeat the glory of the first. The 2nd and 3rd "less than a sentence" were extremely difficult to settle on, whereas the 1st was a moment of purity. I felt like an 80's one hit wonder band trying to recapture the glory with the other two. my apologies. Also, I apologize for lying about having an accident. It was a bullshit excuse for bad typing skills.
I think it's the scotch ON THE ROCKS more so than being a capper, MISTER FOSTER.
Don't be discouraged. Keep trying. We are all trying.
I have a room and two day ski pass at bear mountain. We are expecting a foot in a half of snowsky. This poem is nucking futs & a pyle of shite. i like pregnant chick boobies , in my mouthsky.
Have you a pregnant chickie with yoooooooooooou? Great fun, getting there, eh?
I thought you were going boarding??? 159 view(s)
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