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A Lost Friend (Free verse) by Ray

It wasn't her decision you drove her away. She wanted to stay. But you might as well have crushed her heart. Now all you have is a lost friend. She isn't coming back no matter what you do. Because all you have is .. a lost friend. You betrayed her. Now she knows how you really feel. She doesn't need you anymore. She has a new life and new wonders and new dreams to live. And all you have is..... a lost friend.

Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/12:28 PM
YAWN. bo-ring. theraputing wring is a nice thing to do, but too often folks think it is good for sharing. keep these to yourself. write about something new.




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