In the darkness

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

In this world we see Nothing gets to me God has left Leaving me in the thrift The darkness swallowing me So thick I cannot see No one can help thee From the sins I have hidden within To hear my heart beat Is the only heat The only sound Loneliness... Then it stops Leaving me lifeless in the dark In this world we see Nothing gets to me In the darkness

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[10] Ray 24-Feb-03/9:47 AM Reply

good poem,like it!

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › Ray 24-Feb-03/9:54 AM Reply

woo thx, my mistake in there made me feel like an idiot, its supposed to be DRIFT not THRIFT.

[1] god'swife 24-Feb-03/8:51 PM Reply

Keep 'thrift'.

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › god'swife 25-Feb-03/7:18 PM Reply

Sure y not. *shrugs*