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In the darkness (Free verse) by CrAzYlAdY Surukain

In this world we see Nothing gets to me God has left Leaving me in the thrift The darkness swallowing me So thick I cannot see No one can help thee From the sins I have hidden within To hear my heart beat Is the only heat The only sound Loneliness... Then it stops Leaving me lifeless in the dark In this world we see Nothing gets to me In the darkness

CrAzYlAdY Surukain 24-Feb-03/9:54 AM
woo thx, my mistake in there made me feel like an idiot, its supposed to be DRIFT not THRIFT.




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