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Second Thoughts (Lyric) by Miggy
Not trying to take advantage Of your sudden loneliness If I took yet another guess Trying to make you see what's best Know you have second thoughts After life took you by surprise Still trying to hide inside the box Only to avoid more lies No blame you're down emotionally Think life is still a tragedy After you lost democracy But you have other abilities... So don't waste them (Chorus) Losing faith Knowing that you're still the same Take one step back, And you're off the track Another accident occurs Forgot where the ideas begin Ending up stuck within Desire and hate Pulling you away Off to another fate Emotionally deprived Reality blurring to the human eye Overlooked what is important inside If it isn't too late Don't try to make the same mistake Trying to extend even further... But ended up short (Chorus) There's a difference between charm and harm All I wanted was to get you far And once you listen to your heart The agony will stop... (Chorus x2)

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.266667
Weighted score: 6.9964733
Overall Rank: 92
Posted: January 26, 2003 10:10 AM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2003 10:12 AM PST
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