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In This Room (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
The light in this room
is filtered through curtains
which glow like a flame
textured in vinyl.
The glass on my desk
cool and condensing
holds form to my milk
which is elsewise lost.
Salt in a shaker
of metal and glass
keeps my throat wet
and my tongue sour.
The gum at my left
held tight in its package
keeps my mind on the future
to times when I'll need it.
The Sprite at my right
a dark empty can
keeps my mind on the past
as a lemon and lime.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7019
Posted: January 22, 2003 2:31 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 2:31 PM PST
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